kill the narrator

· still breathing

Kill the narrator. He talks too much.

You talk too much. (You never shut up.)

Shut up “shuttin’ up.”

(Good for dialog)

I TOLD YOU TO SHUT UP

maybe that;s why dead narrators

tell the best stories?

“…then they kilt me.”

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Just relaxing and being yourself

puts you at the head of the pack.

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couple on BART overaccessorized,

semi shaved one-dangly-earring depending

boots and a good color scheme – brick red

but faded, glasses like mine, great

profile, leone-cowboy hairdresser

he, she the good yoko, asian master

of western taste, subtleties, nuance,

stars of their own movies but ultimately

not a story i care to tell (so what?)